The music doesn't fit the slow action and the dry camera position. You could improve the presentation of the video demonstration by circulating various angles, zooms, close-ups, etc. Combined with quickening the action and various other visual improvements, such as cutscenes, the demo clip could be much better.
From the perspective of someone who has rarely seen grappling in action, boy, these are positions often taken in prisons around the world.
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