The Ultimate in Martial Arts

GRACIEAUSTIN · 09-26-2003, 12:03 PM

http://onthemat.com/inter-Relson-gracie-03.html - Thanks to Scotty & Gumby for getting the coverage for us. Thanks to Christy Thomas & Chris & Mike Onzuka for all the technical help on the article. Phil

GRACIEAUSTIN · 10-08-2003, 12:33 AM

Anyone read it? any feed back?

JaredExtreme · 10-08-2003, 12:50 AM

The article is ok....

Szczepankiewicz · 10-08-2003, 10:20 AM

Phil is a writer now?! Just what we need, another Phil writing columns!

I read the article, some good info. My suggestion would be to work on the flow of the article. Have someone who knows nothing about what you're writing on and see if they get the message and enjoy. That's the true test.

I constantly have my wife read what I write, and other people I know online. I've taken a lot of heat for some of it. But it makes me (I hope) a better writer.

Keep it up Phil, just like BJJ, it gets better with practice!

Spanky

GRACIEAUSTIN · 10-10-2003, 10:23 AM

Thanks for the input, I think you hit the nail on the head. I will keep at it and take your advice. Thanks.

09-26-2003, 12:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
GRACIEAUSTIN Registered User Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Austin Posts: 211 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts	An Article I wrote with some help. Read it! http://onthemat.com/inter-Relson-gracie-03.html - Thanks to Scotty & Gumby for getting the coverage for us. Thanks to Christy Thomas & Chris & Mike Onzuka for all the technical help on the article. Phil __________________ WWW.GRACIEAUSTIN.COM

10-08-2003, 12:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
GRACIEAUSTIN Registered User Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Austin Posts: 211 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Anyone read it? any feed back? __________________ WWW.GRACIEAUSTIN.COM

10-08-2003, 12:50 AM	#3 (permalink)
JaredExtreme Registered User Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 1,115 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The article is ok.... __________________ "I don't fight in the street, there's no mats out there." - JaredExtreme

10-10-2003, 10:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
GRACIEAUSTIN Registered User Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Austin Posts: 211 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the input, I think you hit the nail on the head. I will keep at it and take your advice. Thanks. __________________ WWW.GRACIEAUSTIN.COM

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10-08-2003, 10:20 AM	#4 (permalink)
Szczepankiewicz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Meridian, ID, USA Posts: 4,109 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Phil is a writer now?! Just what we need, another Phil writing columns! I read the article, some good info. My suggestion would be to work on the flow of the article. Have someone who knows nothing about what you're writing on and see if they get the message and enjoy. That's the true test. I constantly have my wife read what I write, and other people I know online. I've taken a lot of heat for some of it. But it makes me (I hope) a better writer. Keep it up Phil, just like BJJ, it gets better with practice! Spanky

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