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http://onthemat.com/inter-Relson-gracie-03.html - Thanks to Scotty & Gumby for getting the coverage for us. Thanks to Christy Thomas & Chris & Mike Onzuka for all the technical help on the article. Phil
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Anyone read it? any feed back?
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Phil is a writer now?! Just what we need, another Phil writing columns!
![]() I read the article, some good info. My suggestion would be to work on the flow of the article. Have someone who knows nothing about what you're writing on and see if they get the message and enjoy. That's the true test. I constantly have my wife read what I write, and other people I know online. I've taken a lot of heat for some of it. But it makes me (I hope) a better writer. Keep it up Phil, just like BJJ, it gets better with practice! Spanky |
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Thanks for the input, I think you hit the nail on the head. I will keep at it and take your advice. Thanks.
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