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    I wrote this today at lunch...Its a little story/poem with a bit of sadness, success of a village Nak Muay....

    I hope you can read it like a poem to understand it...if not thanks for reading and hope I havent wasted too much of your time.

    Orchids and Oil

    Our land she bears no fruit
    and the crop will now fall,
    middlemen and markets
    don?t wait on idol stalls.

    If I do not rise and leave
    then I know my sister will,
    to close her eyes and lose her pride
    so we can pay the bill.

    The blessed monk he sees me
    before my Wai to all,
    The train it takes me near to hear
    the stadiums eternal call.

    Bangkok lights sting my eyes
    with the poisoned tuk tuk air.
    As I wipe my eyes with my family?s hope
    on these shoulders I now bare.

    The baht it weighs heavy
    in the hot in Lumpinee air,
    I step the rope like a champion
    as only champions dare.

    I dance to the rhythm
    of the sacred step.
    I remember my Kru
    and knowledge
    which I have always kept.

    When he gave it to me
    to honour our proud past
    I promised to give it too
    and in our peoples it will last.

    The moth it flies high
    to kiss the stadium light,
    I Nak Muay
    now stand ready to fight

    The ringing bell calls us
    to our deadly embrace
    who was once my Thai brother
    now an enemy I must face.


    Two scorpions we dance
    like a violent sweet ballet
    crowds urge me forward
    to snatch victory away,

    As we move to tunes
    of the ancient song
    The sok reigns down on me
    I see my Mongkon

    Blessed it protects me
    from the stings of 3000 years
    I must rise and fight
    to save my family?s tears.

    The chess game it ends
    with our last fierce embrace
    His flesh it gives way
    to a 100mph pace.

    A quick glance to him laying
    With that frozen broken stare
    I feel for his family
    as their cupboards will stay bare.

    The crowd now chant my name
    for this primal deed I?ve done
    I?ve earned them many riches
    I?m now a stadium son.

    A smiling old man collects baht
    as he did not guess,
    he recognized Muay Lek
    in our violent game of chess.

    I now return home
    to expel all hollow fear,
    the money I have bled
    will keep us til next year,



    My sister stays pure and clean
    and will have her wedding day,
    Forever she remembers my sacrifice
    as we grow old and grey.


    As the Siam moon she turns
    our gods have taken my best years,
    I can?t go on forever
    or risk the stadiums jeers.

    The crowds will no longer love me
    if I cannot win their hearts,
    but baht and bet have entwined
    and enslaved this noble art.

    So if when you see me in the field
    or stamp the blooded mat,
    Know my name forever
    on this mortal coil

    as forever I stay chained???

    by orchids and oil.

    By
    Wayne Byrne
    Muay Thai student
    Dublin
    Ireland

  • #2
    I guess nobody liked it!!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by RedRaven View Post
      I guess nobody liked it!!
      I did!!!!!!

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      • #4
        Originally posted by fire cobra View Post
        I did!!!!!!
        Thanks Cobra!!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by RedRaven View Post
          Thanks Cobra!!
          Yin dee na khap Raven.

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