Hmmm I have a question

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Ryu - right on!

If you are planning on having this transferred to a visual medium, it might be a good idea to write out a screen play and story-board (if you're handy with graphics). This would probably help with the marketing.

Read as much as you can, write as much as you can.

Tony

[Ryu (non-working password]

I wanted to thank, one more time, everyone who took the time to read this little excerpt and give me their critique's and comments. Thanks everybody, I'll let you know if it ever takes off.

Ryu