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  • My new women's self-defense site...

    Feedback please!

    www.Womens-Self-Defense.org

    Thanks,

    Tim

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    Look's Professional...

    Originally posted by Tim Mousel
    Feedback please!

    www.Womens-Self-Defense.org

    Thanks,

    Tim
    And that's important...but why would they choose your school? What's different about your school- your name? If you want business then you have to be smarter and cleverer and more willing to attract business than the rest!

    Perhap's show one or two technique's at least...as a talking point when they call or e-mail. They can say what they don't like about the clip and you can dialogue.

    I am disapointed that MALCOLM SUE does not have a film clip or two..he still get's customer's..and probably does have more than enough so...?!I s'pose reputation does count the most!

    How do you stand out from the crowd? (and it's a tough crowd..tough crowd!!)

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    • #3
      It looks great!! I would change the sample flier so the newspaper articles are more about rape and sexual assault than about murder and shootings. I like the list of tips. You may want to tell people about disposable cell phones. I just discovered these. Would add something about investing which kinds of locks work, btw, since so many people think that their locks are effective when they're not. And just to nitpick, it's "your keys" not "you're." Oh, and I would change the section title from "stuff" to a different word that sounds more professional, like "tips" or "articles" or whatever you want it to encompass.

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      • #4
        wow looks good, nice layout, easy to navigate, and informative.

        just one question, who is that in the yellow and black game of death track suit? anyone care to guess? I think I know!

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        • #5
          Pretty good. Simple and eay to navigate. I like the first article.
          You should include a few vids on practical applications. That would attract a few customers. Another important thing to remember is to teach them not to freeze up.

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          • #6
            Pretty cool. Impressive resume' BTW. IMHO I would put the courses as the first "tab" instead of the contact. Get them interested in courses THEN they'll contact you. Just a thought.

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            • #7
              Hi,

              Thanks for all the EXCELLENT feedback! I will work on implementing all of your suggestions.


              Originally posted by GonzoStyles
              wow looks good, nice layout, easy to navigate, and informative.

              just one question, who is that in the yellow and black game of death track suit? anyone care to guess? I think I know!
              I would like to hear your guess...who do you think it is?

              Tim

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              • #8
                Who is it?

                Originally posted by Tim Mousel
                Hi,

                Thanks for all the EXCELLENT feedback! I will work on implementing all of your suggestions.




                I would like to hear your guess...who do you think it is?

                Tim

                Is it you?

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Tant01
                  Is it you?
                  Nope! It's not me. It's Stanley Phillips. You can see his impressive credentials near the bottom of this page:

                  http://www.defend.net/classes/instruct.php

                  Tim

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                  • #10
                    Lookin' good, Tim!

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                    • #11
                      Training the good guys!

                      Originally posted by Tim Mousel
                      Nope! It's not me. It's Stanley Phillips. You can see his impressive credentials near the bottom of this page:

                      http://www.defend.net/classes/instruct.php

                      Tim

                      Thanks kindly. I have read through his bio before, and you're right. It is impressive!




                      When I went through a Special High Intensity Training program years ago (had to be on the LIST) The instructor was funny about things so laugh with me here... He wanted us to prepare to defeat the toughest, biggest, meanest and most highly trained and naturally skilled warrior we could ever imagine...
                      He would be one of those...

                      Better to have his kind on your good side!

                      Hat's off to instructors!

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                      • #12
                        damn! I was guessing it was Tim our gracious forums host............

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